Edit3::// Finally done the comments, and to be clear it took me over three hours to do. I looked to all references that had been shown as really well done, as well as *Allizia's Koipaw application for some of the romantic stuff. I really wanted this to be professionally done and to show just how much it would mean to me should I win this character. I am concerned I won't, but I just can't not try my best... I have fallen in love with her so much.

Edit2::// I love this personality, so should I not win, I'll probably just change the looks and keep the character (change the name as well.) But hopefully that won't happen and she will be mine


Honestly? I think she will be (should I win her) one of the most rounded characters I have ever made. I am really happy with the personality that came out from her. Very happy indeed.Of course, there is no guarantee I'll rp her... but my fingers are crossed and in my heart I really am hoping.

Basic Information

"What you look at me and fall for."

Name :
Birchsnow


Clan :
Riverclan

Breed :
Bobtail (10%) x American Shorthair (80%)

Rank :
Warrior

Age :
40 Moons

Heritage :
**non canon characters**

Mother: Dawnsky

Father: Stripeclaw


_{**If this is two many I'll make less, I just wanted her from a large family. Trust me, I added it to the history.}</sub>
Older Siblings:
First Litter- Stormdusk ( male ) , Berryfrost ( male ), Featherflight ( female ) , Lightpelt ( male ), Antstripe ( male )
Second litter- Rabbitfoot ( male ) , Nightclaw ( male )

Then she was the youngest of the second litter

Younger Siblings
Third Litter- Shardpaw ( male ) and Reedpaw ( male )

Personal Information

"For all ya'll, there's the good, the bad and the ugly. For me, there's the phenomenal, the alright, and the downright frightening (for you.)"

Physical Information:

Scent:
Like fresh rain and water lilies.

Eye Colour:
Sky blue w/ brown

Coat texture:
Meticulously clean, as that is how a large portion of Birchsnow's day is spent. It is soft, but quite thin. The pro side to this is that water seems to drop right off of her. The con to this is wind cuts right through her pelt, so she gets cold easily on windy days, and tries to stay away from clear areas of the territory.

Appearance:
A well raised Riverclan cat, even from the most respected Riverclan heritage, would look to Birchsnow in awe of her perfect Riverclan cat frame. She is slender, graceful and agile in both static looks and the way she moves. Because of the high fish content, her coat is glossy and shiny. She is average sized for a female cat though, and muscular as any wild cat should be. Her paws are a small, a trait passed down to be best for maneuvering very slippery rocks, but it means her blows don't hit as much as she would want them to.


Personality:

The Phenomenal:

| Loyal |
"I am made up of three things. My home, my loved ones and my badass attitude."
If it's a Riverclan is the best, and the rest don't matter is a loyal warrior than Birchsnow is exactly that. Beyond her flippant attitude to others, which may need to be wrangled in at points sure, is a she cat who truly loves Riverclan. She says it was in how she was raised, but however it happened, once she values something or someone she is all second chances, sympathy and loyalty. She'd die for any of her clan mates in the name of Riverclan, and any of her friends and family in the name of love. Though she takes a while to trust, once it's there it takes a lot to make her change her mind. Loyalty to someone is the one idea she is truly stubborn with. Of course, this is a personality trait of hers that she shares only when it help her. Otherwise, she knows that if anyone disagrees it will lead to a fight so, for the better good, she avoids talking about just how loyal she is and to whom.

| Quick Thinker |
"It takes intelligence to make up a truly worthwhile insult."
In her, that is very visible because though most of her quick thinking is used to come up with witty insults and giving out tongue lashings to those she doesn't approve of, you have to admire her for how fast she comes up with everything. If she even attempted once to be funny, she'd probably find that she had quick witt but she prefers to laugh at jokes as an audience member rather than the one on the hot seat. (It's probably about the only time you won't see her wanting all the lime light to herself. Where this attribute comes in handy are during crisis situations, where she quickly comes up with a suitable course of action and remains calm under stress.


The Alright:

| Flirty |
"Toms don't DO friendships with she cats, consider it nothing more than a really long, boring unstrategic form of court ship."
So then what else is there do do with them? Well, since Birchsnow lives under the firm impression that any connection to a member of the opposite sex must be with, well, a sexual intention she uses her assets to their best. She considers herself beauty to the eye of EVERY beholder, and flaunts it. She's quick to let you know that you are, or are not, a worthwhile specimen of her affections and flirts both seductively and shamelessly to create one very confusing package to the poor tom cat. (Though some would consider him lucky.) She is good with words, and her voice when around tom cats oozes sex appeal, and she wouldn't stop it if she could. She adores the attention it gets her, because no other attention is as focused as that of then a tom wants to get you in heat.

| Vain |
"Well, of course, there are some born beautiful and some who have to work at it. I was born it and everyone else must work for it. I know, it's a blessing I well deserve."
Birchsnow, in all aspects, loves herself. The only cat cat she shows public displays of affection towards is, again, herself. She loves herself so much she refuses to acknowledge or hear( she will go on as if she didn't) anything that could even slightly hint towards her being anything but perfect. There is first place, where she is, and then there is everyone else in last. She does believe that, as far as personality and looks go, she's far above everyone else. It's a surprise she can even act remotely humbled around the presence of someone of higher rank... Though of course that being said it isn't in the same way some cat who was truly humble would act either.

| Prude |
"You let him do WHAT to you, well now that is just disgusting and incredibly improper."
Somehow, despite being a total flirt somehow Birchsnow managed to grow up a prude as well. Anything to do with, well, you know... THAT. ( s. e. x. birds and bee's stuff ) She can't handle it. She will not hear of it, speak of it, or see anything or anyone who has to do with it. If it happens between two mates, well, that is an unfortunate accident and she will still speak to them. Should you do anything beyond mild G rated hugs in her presence with anyone who is NOT your mate? Well, that is just inexcusable slutty behavior and she is very quick to want nothing to do with it, and by extension you. This creates a lot of anger in her life where to cats have been lead on by her flirting, and then dropped away with blue balls at the first mention of doing anything sexual. Of course, this keeps her safe from being hurt as well as making her less of a threat to other she cats, because any she cat who actually knows her knows she would never live up to any toms wants or needs.



And The Downright Frightening::

| Judging |
"Well now, and you expect yourself to be worth my time because why exactly?"
Birchsnow has a little tendency to judge cats point blank. This makes her very quick to react on that as well which usually isn't a good thing although the rare time it can be. She hates anyone who tried to be out of the ordinary, or sluts, or 'perfect' cats, or messy cats, or insecure cats, or needy/clingy cats, or workaholic cats, or lazy cats, or mean cats, or door mats- and the list goes on and on. It makes finding friends a little tough when she always seems to find something she can judge as completely undesirable about the other other cat that would make her either tell them they have to change or refuse to hang around them. See, most cats don't take that to well. Lets not forget, then, how hard it is to earn her respect. I feel sorry for the poor kit who ever gets her as a mentor. They better be ready to act perfectly acceptable or else hear of it over and over and over again. She also, though she gives second chances once someone gains her loyalty, believes personalities to be fixed in stones, so once a slut always a slut.

|Insecure|
" " (Birchsnow refuses to speak of such horror. It doesn't exist, you must be crazy, your wrong.)
But lets be honest here folks. The real reason I can't write these personalities in first person is because then you would never read of Birchsnow's driving personality trait. She's painfully insecure. Yes, she has the perfectly hot bod and all the toms wants it, but she doesn't want it. She doesn't love it, and there are so many things wrong with it she is just thankful that everyone else seems to be blind because they haven't noticed how truly ugly she is. She is fat, not muscular. Her eyes are to small and her muzzle looks like one of those sky reachers you see in big twoleg towns. And that is not even touching on how much she hates herself, and feels inadequate, in regards to who she really is. Who is that exactly? Well, even she is to afraid to know.



Sexuality:
"Not that you'll ever be in a place to know or care about such things, fool."

Orientation:
Straight.

Preference(s):
She likes to be the dominant one in the relationship, but she can't stand someone unintelligent or a doormat, so they need to be able to speak against her once and a while. In fact, she quite likes that.... because although relationship wise she is dominant she will only be turned out by the ale being dominant and pulling all her secret strings she never knew she had.

Looking For:
Nothing. Flirting comes naturally, but she is a strong independent brown tabby with white that don't need no man and doesn't even want one.

Sensitive Spots:
SHOULD you even get to a place where this information is relevant, though she doesn't know it (yet) her best places to kiss are her chin, behind her ear, and the top of her neck where it is just below her back jaw line.

Experience:
You would think, from her flirting, that she is well adapt in the natures of kitten making, but she considers it just that. Something done once, twice if you both are respectable and expected to create amazing kits, and so she is clumsy and has lots to learn when it comes to how to please a tom cat. Of course, she'd tell you she'd never care to learn, and that is true. (for now.)

Birchsnow's Hot List:

[Flirted With:]


[Engaged With:]
_{*Anything more than flirting counts here, because it's rare she would.*}


Extra's:

Likes:
-Water
-Swimming
-Voles
-Attention
-Winning

Dislikes:
-Cold / Winter
-Snakes/Frogs/Birds
-She Cats better than she is
-Negative Traits

Fears-
-Honesty
-Being Alone
-Thunderclan Cats



Little Quirks:

--> Birchsnow finds scars VERY sexy. She thinks they mean some tragic back story which she is addicted to because she always fantasizes about really mary sue romances- even though she'd never dare do such a thing.

--> Envious of cats who's romances work; and because of it will make endless jobs about how she'd never do something like that. Which is probably true. She hates the idea of a relationship, but that doesn't stop her from being envious of that blissful ignorance. (like she wishes she could be that brainless to think that would work and to not mind hanging around someone equally as brainless.)

--> When she's angry, she dreams of running away to be a kittypet, where everyone would wait on her paw and tail.

--> She is super competitive with other she cats, always comparing herself to them to make sure she is the best in every way. If she feels less then, she can not only be rude but downright mean. It is not unlike her to to try and destroy a she cat who calls her on this, on being anything but perfect, and one she thinks is better than her.

--> Because of the quirk above, she is actually very lonely. Since toms can't be friends, and she can't find a she cat she can be friends with, she just is alone. This is really sad for her.

History

"Because wouldn't you all like to know what has to happen to create someone as fabulous as myself."

Before she was Born:

When her mother was still a warrior, Dawnsky was known for being very intelligent, and able to see all sides of every problem. It is said that, at this time, she was often the one the leader would turn to once and a while with a difficult choice. Not as the first response but as a final vote sort of opinion. Dawnsky was the daughter of the once deputy, and so of course she met all the expectations of being a proper she cat. Then, when she had seen three season cycles, she suddenly started seeing an older clan mate through new eyes.

Sharpclaw was 60 moons old. He was well respected for being a cat that followed orders with no resistance and always did it efficiently and effortlessly. He was talented, to say the least. Everyone wanted him to be with someone, anyone, but the tom had showed no interest in females. That changed when Dawnsky started showing interest in him.

The two had a quick, whirlwind romance much to the happiness of their other clan mates, in that, was their first litter shortly after. It was a litter that was met with lots of excitement, and from that Dawnsky rarely spent time out of the queens den, preferring the life of a queen and bringing new life in to that of a warrior.

Kithood:

Birchsnow was born in their second litter. The youngest of three in that litter they where the litter after they already had everything they could ask for. The icing on their already perfect cake called family. Of course, when she was born her older siblings from the first litter where only 3 moons old. It caused much whispers among the clan, but both her parents where so loved in the clan that they tried to keep the whispers to a minimum.

That being said, Birchkit loved it. She had older siblings who watched over her and loved her and played with her. Even siblings of both genders, which was amazing seeing as how both her siblings from her litter where boys.

Of course, later on, her older siblings did become apprentices. That meant more one on one time with her mother though, so by three moons of age, Birchkit was at a place where she could see the bright side and be happy for her older siblings and cheer them on with her little mewl as they got matched up with their own mentors.

The rest of her kit life was easy, serene. Their mother gave them her full attention, and yet, it didn't feel that way. The older Birchkit got the more she realized that it seemed that all her mother did was talk about her first litters accomplishments. It started to bug her, really. She felt like she was constantly having to compete against her older siblings for her mothers attention.

Apprentice Life:

When she became an apprentice, everything was relatively quiet as far as drama went. Of course, it was the calm before the storm of course. More and more, Dawnsky focused on the older sisters, and not Birchpaw except to compare her to the. This wasn't done intentionally of course, but they where turning out so beautiful and perfect that Dawnsky wanted that for all her kits. A normal cat would reason that this was done for good intentions, but there was no explaining this to Birchpaw. She began to learn her competitive behavior. She tried desperately to do huge acts that would gain her mother and father, who during this time had gone back to work and so wasn't around as much, attention. Every time she did something really amazing for her age, they said she was growing up just like her sisters.

She couldn't leave their shadows, and she couldn't say anything because she knew her mother was coming from a place of love. Her mentor, one day, tried to speak to her about this, but she wouldn't listen and flipped out. He tried to tell her that she had to love herself, and then she'd realize how everyone else loved her. How HE loved her.

Then the worst thing happened. A skirmish between another clan, they kept the knowledge of which clan away from her, lead to a full battle, of which her father and siblings went to.

They came home warriors, and then a few sundowns later the wound one of her older sisters had received got infected and she died a martyr. From then on, things only got worse. Her mom went in to deep grief, and this took on the shape of trying to make Birchpaw in to who her sister had been. His father reacted by pulling away from everyone he loved.

That was just in her family. The whole clan was devastated. She had been great in hunting and fighting. Selfless in protecting others, which head lead to her injury. She had a mate, they only found out about later, and had died pregnant. The death rocked the clan. And Birchpaw only grew more angry.

Then her father died, consumed by grief, and her mother admitted that she was pregnant and went to being a queen again.

And Birchpaw did everything she could to never become her sister, and began to hate all she cats.

Warrior Daze:

This is where her flirty nature came in handy. Her deceased sister had been the opposite, loving with her whole heart to only one cat. She had been honest about it, never played games. Birchsnow now, yes, named horrifically after the fact that her sister had died in snow, rebelled against everything that was her family. She faught with her brothers constantly. Her mentor, who hadn't been to much older than her, a new warrior, she flirted with after noticing his affections for her. She lead him along, till he confessed, then turned him down and said she wanted nothing to do with any toms.

She went on like this, a downward spiral. She started fights on borders and was becoming a troubled child in all cases of the word. She had two younger brothers now, but she never even saw them. She was begged to of course, and only replied "why, because my sister would have? Well then get someone else to care because those two maggots have nothing to do with me."

Sure, some cats tried to talk to her. If they where female she hated them. If they where male she had them think they had changed her, till they fell for her and she tore their heart out.

Like everything though, time moves on and soon it was winter again. Her brothers where apprentices with mentors of their own and she was the cat everyone knew to avoid.

Then a green cough went around. Without her favored daughter, her mate, and a daughter that was out of control, Dawnsky seemed to let the sickness take her and she died swiftly with a smile.

Then her brothers got it, and although normally she did nothing but fight with them.... Birchsnow found herself at a loss. They only both had gotten sick because when one had got it, the other refused to distance himself. She was envious of that family bond, one she could have been a part of...

She went to try and make things better, but when she poured her heart out- said everything about how she hated herself and hated never being able to be her sister whom she had admired as well. . .

And they where to sick, and on to many herbs, to understand.

A few days later they died... and the death spurred Birchsnow to get better, a little. No longer a catastrophe, but still never able to be her sister, she finds herself now somewhere in the middle, many season cycles later.

After Roleplaying...:

It has been moons since her brothers deaths, but where she goes from here is all up to fate. Who knows, maybe your cat will have a paw at changing who she is to become.

Roleplay Information

"Because I know ya'll want to get close to wonderful me."

Availabilty:

Chat Rp- Anytime I am on, just shoot me a comment saying what chat I should be on.

Note Rp- Anytime! Just shoot me a note, preferably starting the rp and/or saying the purposed plot for it. (can be simple something like, they go hunting will suffice.)

Skype Rp- Anytime! Just ask. My skype name is halfkat101

Comment Rp- Comment AWAY!


Time Zone: Pacific | Canada

Best Time's To Catch Me: 6:00 onwards or on weekends.


Heart Chart / Relationships:
**Will add once character design is set as to whether or not I will use this one or a different one.**


Role Play Example:

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Artwork of Birchsnow

"It'll be hard to keep track of; since everyone must want to draw me."

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